Tuesday, 30 June 2015

For the birds

Once there lived a bird that came on the power line. Then another bird came and it put its wings out and accidentally hit the other bird. Then the bird pecked the other one and they started to fight until another bird came and that bird hit him and then lots of birds came and they all started arguing.

 Then they here a noise and all the birds turn to see it was a big bird that was waving to them. All the birds looked at him in a weird way.

 Then all the birds started laughing and doing a dance. Then all the birds stopped because the big bird said something all the tiny birds went away and whispered to each other.

 Then the big bird flew on to the power line in the middle of the little birds. But because the big bird was so heavy the power line nearly hit the ground. Then all the little birds started to shout at the big bird. Then the big bird started to do the same.

 Until one bird pecked the big bird in the stomach and the big bird fell but his legs were still holding on to the power line. Then two birds started to peck the toes of the big bird. When there was only one toe on the power line they stopped pecking on the big bird but the big birds toe was losing grip till it fell off.

 Then all the little birds shot up in the air and lost all there feathers but the big bird didnt lose any and it was ok. Then the big bird started laughing at the little birds.



Wednesday, 17 June 2015

A cloudy lesson

Once upon a time there lived a grandpa and a grandson. One day they were up on a platform. Then the grandpa got out a box and inside was a stick that went in the ground but it wasn`t  a normal stick it was a magical stick that had a circle at the top and if you blow in it it will make a circle cloud. the grandpa went first and the offered the kid to have a turn. But when the kid had a go he couldn`t blow that much so his cloud were really small but he kept trying then the grandpa told him to blow more powerful till he accidentally broke the stick.  The grandpa was sad and looked at his cloud that he blew shrinking then the kid looked at the broken circle at  the bent circle at his grandpas cloud shrinking but some how the kid bent  the circle into a amazing star then  a dog and then a love heart the grandpa was amazed!

Thursday, 11 June 2015

The catch

Once upon a time there lived a boy in a village. One day he went out fishing to get some fish for his village.Nothing was coming on his rode he was sad. Then he felt something he pulled and tried but he only got a tiny little fish. Then he heard a noise that was coming from behind a bush. He saw a little fox that had his leg tied to a tree. The boy got out his knife I think the fox thought that the boy was going to kill him because the fox tucked his head to the ground. But all the boy did was cut the rope and then the boy got really scared because the fox pounced on the boy.Then the fox stole the fish and ran off the boy was really angry so he went off charging at the fox. The fox went under a thorn plant the boy wasn`t sure he looked back at his village and then went under the thorn plant. The fox went under a log the boy went over the log and looked in the log and there was nothing but then the fox came out the top of the log and jumped on him. Then the fox jumped over the tree and the boy ran below it and caught the fox but the fox managed to escape. Then the fox ran up a hill the boy followed the fox then the boys hat came off and looked down and saw how high he was he was so angry that he climbed even higher. Once the fox was at the top the boy saw the fox  throw the fish but he didn't no were until he saw sun light he saw a big lake. The boy saw this massive fish come out of the water and the boy was amazed. Then the fox gave him a stick the boy broke some of  it so it was sharp. At the end of the day the boy got a big fish and a meduim sized fish he gave the fox the meduim size fish. The fox turned into mist and the boy went back to his village very happy.

Wednesday, 10 June 2015

Math goal

I have achieved my math goal which is all multiplication facts, because I have been practising my multiplication facts and Jax tested me with ten questions and I got 32 seconds and Jax said that was good.

My writing goal

My writing goal is to get my ideas down quickly I have achieved this goal with squiggle stories because I imagine what I'm gonna write and then I can write about it.

Reading goal

I have achieved my reading goal which is chunking letters and sounds together. I've achieved this by reading slowly so I can sound the word out and if I can't sound it out I come back to it.

key competency goal

My key competency goal is to manage myself I've achieved this goal because I've been getting to my work and knowing what I`m going to do and I`m not talking to my friends as much as before.

Tuesday, 9 June 2015

clock tower writing

Once upon a time there was a girl that was walking down the street when she met this woman. The girl said are you alright because she looked like a grandma and she was carrying food from the supermarket. The woman said yeah I would like some help so they went to the woman's house; it was a strange looking house. But then the woman made the girl live in a clock. If the girl came out of the clock everything would stop moving and it would have no colour . So all her life was just living in a clock until a man came to rescue her and they lived happily ever after.